Drift, a Short Story by Becky Renner



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7 Comments Add yours

  1. I couldn’t stop reading. Had to see where it was going…and then…BAM. Sucker punch. Nice job. I enjoyed it.

  2. Scribbler41 says:

    In brief, I’m intrigued by the storytelling, delivered so beautifully! Read it twice – my way of enjoying a story that can hold my attention to the end. Will surely, and in good time, be reading the remaining tales. Thank you, Becky Renner, for the sample.

  3. stripey2 says:

    An excellent read from start to finish, i look forward to reading more of your work Becky, thanks for supplying the link to your story.

  4. michelle says:

    I really enjoyed the story. I liked the way you introduced the characters. Can’t wait to read more!

  5. Christine Johnson says:

    Great writing. Thanks for sharing

  6. Oh wow this was truly a breathtaking story. I love the abundant use of imagery, it really blew me away. In some ways your writing style reminded me a little of Raymond Chandler, though your writing style was definately more detailed. I commend you for encompassing so much in such few words. My weakness are short stories. Though maybe I’ll have to learn to overcome it, as that seems the way to go for us writers. Keep up the good work!

    1. Becky Renner says:

      Thanks! I struggle with short stories, too. My decent ones are very few and far between.

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